Baz Posted April 12, 2013 Share Posted April 12, 2013 The Broads? Where are they ? never heard of ‘em, Where are they ? In Europe I wonder? not a chance, They’re in that magical place, Norfolk, The Norfolk Broads. The magical sunsets, The magical sunrises, Only to be seen by wondering eyes, Eyes of the young, eyes of the old, Sights like these will always be told. The mists on the water, will always show, The mystery, the intrigue, the ghostly glow, Where tales are told, of this watery flow. Where man once trod, now ghosts only go. The digging now done,the water has won, Those ghosts at rest, all sleep as one. Their job is done, they are at rest, What they leave, is only the best. A place of beauty, a place of peace, A place for the hoards, The Norfolk Broads. Baz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelticMemories Posted April 13, 2013 Share Posted April 13, 2013 Don't give up the day job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baz Posted April 13, 2013 Author Share Posted April 13, 2013 I do appreciate constructive criticism. Many thanks. Baz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbird Posted April 14, 2013 Share Posted April 14, 2013 Well I liked it Baz! Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk HD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loribear Posted April 18, 2013 Share Posted April 18, 2013 hi baz, it started off abit shaky but ended up being a lovely poem, if you love poetry don't give up trying, lori Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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